This game definitely has potential
I think this game definitely has some potential to be a lot better than it currently is. Right now however it does suffer from some flaws. The gameplay unfortuneately is not very intuative at all, and in fact I really had no idea / interest in trying to figure out a lot of the main town.
Also the time between random battles is just rediculously fast, and really killed the fun factor IMO.
I think you can actually tweak this game a bit and make it a LOT better, for instance by adding a better way of moving / interacting with NPCs and structures. Also it would be great if there was more of a focus on guiding the player through what to do and where to go initially that would be great.
Umm, mainly just a lot of polish would do WONDERS for this game..as currently it seems like it COULD be fun, however it just isn't. Keep up the great work!
Oh, and btw...it's officer Dugal :)